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== Nomination. ==
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==Special Pilot Abilities==
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Perhaps it would be best to limit references for SPA's to what is in the core rulebooks rather than individual cards?--[[User:Cache|Cache]] ([[User talk:Cache|talk]]) 11:26, 21 February 2022 (EST)
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:Hi Cache. I have nothing else to refer, that is why I'm using the cards... I'm so advanced now that I'm going to keep with them...--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 11:28, 21 February 2022 (EST)
  
Hey PS, I have nominated you for an award in the ''[[BattleTechWiki:2019_Founder's_Awards|2019 Founder's Awards]]'' for your work on the wiki last year but only as an honorable mention. This year I am actively choosing not to nominate any of the "old guard" who have been here for years in hopes that a show of appreciation for newer editors will spur them on. I know time in service wise you are not one of the "old guard" but with your output I think you are well and truly invested in the wiki. Do not worry, I still love you and what you do! {{ emoticon | ;) }} [[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 09:49, 16 February 2020 (EST)
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==Apocryphal Image Category==
:Thanks!--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 04:07, 18 February 2020 (EST)
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It is a little late now, but the <nowiki>{{ApocryphalImage}}</nowiki> tag automatically adds the image to that category. There is no need to manually add the category to each image.--[[User:Cache|Cache]] ([[User talk:Cache|talk]]) 08:52, 14 March 2022 (EDT)
::You've made some amazing contributions since you've joined Pserratv! [[User:Nicjansma|Nicjansma]] ([[User talk:Nicjansma|talk]]) 21:07, 7 July 2020 (EDT)
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:Well, there will be more, so if that is the case, less work for me ;)--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 11:26, 14 March 2022 (EDT)
:::Many thanks Nic, I really love this wiki--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 03:56, 8 July 2020 (EDT)
 
  
==Steel Brothers timeline==
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==Tim Nelson==
Saw that you pinpointed the year fir the [[Steel Brothers]] merc unit to 3020. Where's that info from? All source material I know is without timestamp, so it could really be almost any year. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 14:57, 21 February 2020 (EST)
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You created the page [[Tim Nelson]] a few years ago, and last night it wound up in [[Special:LonelyPages]]. Do you recall anything he might have been an illustrator for? A Google Search gives me nothing, but [[Jim Nelson]] did draw a lot of stuff. I am wondering if you might have mistaken a J for a T in a signature?--[[User:Talvin|Talvin]] ([[User talk:Talvin|talk]]) 09:22, 12 April 2022 (EDT)
:It is a hint. It says in the description: "At an unspecified point in time, implied to be sometime in the late [[Succession Wars era]] (prior to the Duchy of Andurien's secession from the [[Free Worlds League]] after the [[Fourth Succession War]] and implicitly also prior to the signing of the [[Concord of Kapteyn]]), the Steel Brothers were employed by the Duchy of Andurien for border security and special operations, where they saw combat against pirate forces at least once." amd as the Concord of Kapteyn is from 3021, I selected 3020, but it is true it is not 100% confirmed.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 17:43, 21 February 2020 (EST)
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:It is clearly a mistake from my end. Page should be deleted.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 08:58, 14 April 2022 (EDT)
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::Tagged!--[[User:Talvin|Talvin]] ([[User talk:Talvin|talk]]) 09:01, 14 April 2022 (EDT)
  
==InfoBoxMilitaryCommand==
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== Spanish edition - BattleTech: Refuerzos ==
Hi PS, just wanted to let you know that the use of two older templates [[Template:InfoBoxMercUnit]] and [[Template:InfoBoxStateUnit]] is deprecated. We intend to fold these into [[Template:InfoBoxMilitaryCommand]], and only the latter template should be used for new articles. (Older articles will be updated eventually, and the old templates will be phased out.) [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 04:53, 3 April 2020 (EDT)
 
:OK, once confirmed I might take this as a project to do by myself :).--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 05:43, 3 April 2020 (EDT)
 
::Cough cough [[Red Brigade‎]]... :) [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 15:57, 7 May 2020 (EDT)
 
:::I'm getting old... fixed :)--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 05:12, 8 May 2020 (EDT)
 
  
==Heart of Stone==
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Hello Pserratv.  In [[List of BattleTech Products in Spanish#BattleTech: Refuerzos]] the description appears to be a copy of the AeroTech entry. I suspect that this may be a case of copy and paste where the title (and perhaps other info) was not updated.  When you have an opportunity, could you please check and update that entry?  --[[User:Dude RB|Dude RB]] ([[User talk:Dude RB|talk]]) 09:01, 16 April 2022 (EDT)
Hi Pere, me again. :) I was wondering about your new article, ''[[Heart of Stone (Individual JumpShip)]]''. You've created an article ''[[Heart of Stone]]'' before - apparently describing the same vessel, but as a DropShip. If you aren't sure then that's what the article should say. Don't make things up. ;) [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 14:57, 6 April 2020 (EDT)
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:I'll have to review yes.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 03:40, 19 April 2022 (EDT)
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::Thanks. --[[User:Dude RB|Dude RB]] ([[User talk:Dude RB|talk]]) 18:14, 19 April 2022 (EDT)
  
:there are two, with same name, ona a dropship and another a jumpship... it can be a mistake in thd 3135PDA Journal, but types are different [[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 15:29, 6 April 2020 (EDT)
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== Marpesia Stables Image ==
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If you want the 50px resolution for this image, you will have to create a 210px image with transparent background surrounding it. It's the only way I've found to get around the issue.--[[User:Cache|Cache]] ([[User talk:Cache|talk]]) 12:07, 2 May 2022 (EDT)
  
::Ah yes, I see that now. The vessel is described as a DropShip in the first epigraph and then consistently as a JumpShip in the next four. I think the first is in error; but it's technically also possible that these are two ships. There should be cross references in the articles though. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 15:50, 6 April 2020 (EDT)
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==Drake Allin==
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Hey, I've embarked on a project to update the various Bloodname pages and I'm currently working on the Ghost Bears -- there's a character named Star Captain Drake Allin who has both a citation referring to page 40 of Invading Clans and a linked page that gives the same citation. However, I've reviewed Invading Clans and can find no such reference. Can you by any chance point me in the direction of where I might find this character so the citations can be updated? -[[User:Hugo Bossk|Hugo Bossk]] ([[User talk:Hugo Bossk|talk]]) 18:51, 25 May 2022 (EDT)
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:Discussion here: [[Talk:Drake Allin]]--[[User:Talvin|Talvin]] ([[User talk:Talvin|talk]]) 19:08, 25 May 2022 (EDT)
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::I've answered there, no good news.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 06:30, 30 May 2022 (EDT)
  
:::I'll do that tomorrow, with a laptop and not by phon2.
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== Cool find ==
::::Done (correctly I hope).--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 03:40, 7 April 2020 (EDT)
 
  
== Old weapons stuff ==
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I found a page where someone is talking about an old catalog for Diseños Orbitales.  My Spanish is...comprendo un poquito.  I thought you might be interested. https://roldelos90.blogspot.com/2016/09/un-catalogo-de-disenos-orbitales-1992.html
  
Hey PS, saw you started recreating some of PerkinsC's old super super complicated weapons article work, and adding categories to weapon brands. A lot of Perkins stuff was very much categories for the sake of having categories and to make it worse a lot of his weapons work was based on spreadsheets of his own creation trying to create a unified weapons rules and stats system between all weapons. This stuff dates back to before the wiki had a lot of its current guidelines and standards, and as such be very careful with it because things although usually statistically correct, might be presented in a way that is not exactly true to lore.--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 06:42, 14 April 2020 (EDT)
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--[[User:Talvin|Talvin]] ([[User talk:Talvin|talk]]) 13:05, 1 June 2022 (EDT)
: I've been trying to reduce the number of [https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Special:UncategorizedPages Uncategorized pages] and [https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Special:UncategorizedCategories Uncategorized categories], and this might be the root cause of the issue. If we feel some of those things should be deleted, we should do that, otherwise zealots of order like me end up messing things up.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 06:51, 14 April 2020 (EDT)
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:And on that note, I have made [[Diseños Orbitales]].--[[User:Talvin|Talvin]] ([[User talk:Talvin|talk]]) 13:39, 1 June 2022 (EDT)
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::Thanks! It is interesting to see it. I had one (not this one) long time ago, but died from age...--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 04:14, 2 June 2022 (EDT)
  
== InfoBox update ==
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==Karsten/Bennis Productions==
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Hey PS,
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Just so you know I changed Karsten/Bennis Productions to [[Karsten-Bennis Productions]] as the wiki code wants to create a sub page from anything with a slash in the title.--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 10:39, 7 June 2022 (EDT)
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::OOO, didn't know. I'll review the links as most probably there are some of them incorrect.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 10:52, 7 June 2022 (EDT)
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== Template: Format Link ==
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Seeing your past edits on fixing redirects, I want to let you know of this "new" Template we have to make linking of sections in pages easier. As well it can work as a redirect link as well.[[Template:Format_link]] --[[User:Deadfire|Deadfire]] ([[User talk:Deadfire|talk]]) 17:02, 20 June 2022 (EDT)
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:Good to know. Thanks.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 08:19, 23 June 2022 (EDT)
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== Lider ==
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Morning, Pserratv. Question of pure curiosity from me: why is the word "LiDER" backwards on [[:File:Warhammer_II_Stats.png|this image of the Warhammer II]]? All of the other words display properly.--[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 11:50, 21 June 2022 (EDT)
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:I've possessed this for ages and never saw that detail. Most probably it is an error preparing the pages... usually is written correctly.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 08:18, 23 June 2022 (EDT)
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::I've been checking them all, and LiDER is the spell in all of them I see two options Revanche:
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::* They wanted to make it special.
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::* In spanisht the word is Líder, so maybe to make it more international they took out the accent but kept the letter in non-capital letters. I sincerely do not know how this works now, but when I studied it was not needed to put accents in capital letters, but a must with non-capital
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::Hope it helps--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 11:18, 11 October 2022 (EDT)
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== ER medium laser capitalization ==
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Hello! Just wanted to say that, at least to my understanding, [[ER medium laser]]s aren't capitalized, just like [[medium laser]]s. If I am wrong, do feel free to jab me! -[[User:Breenland|Breenland]] ([[User talk:Breenland|talk]]) 15:40, 15 September 2022 (EDT)
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:Sincerely speaking, there has been so much movement on this topic that I'm totally lost...--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 10:21, 22 September 2022 (EDT)
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== BattleCorps page numbers ==
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Hi Pserratv
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I see you've added page numbers to some of the BattleCorps citations. Can you tell me where these come from? [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 13:40, 24 October 2022 (EDT)
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:There was a recap PDF with all the articles base on these list:
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* [[List of Arts and Leisure articles]]
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* [[List of General INN articles]]
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* [[List of Isle of the Blessed articles]]
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* [[List of MilSpecs articles]]
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* [[List of ScandalVids articles]]
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* [[List of Solaris Broadcasting Co. articles]]
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I'm using this.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 05:54, 25 October 2022 (EDT)
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:: I didn't run across a recap PDF last time I went through the site's downloads section. Do you have a URL for it? [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 11:29, 25 October 2022 (EDT)
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:::I think they were shared to me by [[User:HF22]] himself.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 12:33, 25 October 2022 (EDT)
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:::: Thanks. I think that might be a limited-access document I read about, so I won't ask him for a copy. [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 14:32, 26 October 2022 (EDT)
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== technical category ==
  
 
Hey PS,
 
Hey PS,
  
Just a heads up, I have updated the [[:Template:InfoBoxCharacter|Character infobox]] to include rank and title in order to add flexability. I have no intention of going through all the character articles to update them, but for the future if you could include the new box in newly created/updated aticles it would be good.--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 08:12, 16 April 2020 (EDT)
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Deadfire has asked me have a word with you about you creating the "technical category for administration purposes" stuff. I am not sure what they do, but Deadfire seems pretty unhappy about them so could you hold off on creating more and possibly consider having a conversation with DF about what needs doing on the wiki regarding such stuff.--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 12:41, 8 January 2023 (EST)
: Good to know. Indeed I'm going to create a new character soon. Updating all characters is the kind of patience project I might take :).--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 08:16, 16 April 2020 (EDT)
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:: I intend to push for the updated commands box to go live soon as well, When it does I will do my best to hammer through the Merc commands and then leave it as a similar patience project. I think three patience projects (character infobox, commands infobox, systems) and my Houses/titles project is likely enough to keep me in work for the rest of the year!--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 08:25, 16 April 2020 (EDT)
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:no worries, i'll do. But all those pages are appearing as top wanted pages when they are nothing.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 16:33, 8 January 2023 (EST)
:::And maybe eve more :)--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 08:32, 16 April 2020 (EDT)
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== Spanish translations ==
  
== Scenario Pack: The Battle of Addicks ==
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Hi, Pserratv.
Hi PS,
 
  
in the [[Jackson Tetsuhara]] article you're quoting a ''Scenario Pack: The Battle of Addicks'' for some information. However, it does not show up in the Bibliography section and I couldn't find such a product anywhere. Can you elaborate on this source please? [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 05:25, 22 April 2020 (EDT)
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I found some epub translations on Anna's Archive that I think were a fan project. ''Fin de partida'', ''Punto de conflagracion'', ''Patriotas y tiranos'', and ''Tormentas del destino''; ''Silencio en el paraíso'' and ''Verdades y sombras'' by Martin Delrio; and ''La forja de un héroe'', ''Operacion audacia'', and ''Rugido de honor'' by Blaine Lee Pardoe. Have you heard anything about these? [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 21:39, 25 March 2023 (EDT)
:This link appears in Katana's Tormak profile also, I used the links as informationi. I feel this is one of the Dark Age scenarios that were created for the Dark Age miniature game. I'll have to check.
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:Yes, they are the spanish translations of these books. I do not have them (indeed in spanihs I basically have both trilogies and a couple more.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 11:49, 30 March 2023 (EDT)
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:: Do you know whether they're official products or fan translations? [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 18:50, 30 March 2023 (EDT)
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:::Hi, in this link [[List of BattleTech Print Novels in Spanish]] you can find the ones I identified as original. There are some from an Anna, but the rest. I mean there are original translations of them. I simply don't have them though.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 05:27, 31 March 2023 (EDT)
  
Indeed I found this on [[User talk:Akashi]]:<br>
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== Disambig pages ==
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Hy, is [Scenario Pack: The Battle of Addicks] a canon source or fanon? I can't found any info from the scenario pack, can you help me, thanks.--[[User:Doneve|Doneve]] ([[User talk:Doneve|talk]]) 12:39, 17 April 2013 (PDT)
 
: It looks canon to me - this is where I stumbled over it, pure coincidence and a lucky hit on google: http://sarna.s3.amazonaws.com/docs/products/mwda/scenarios/addicks.pdf <br>[http://www.dropshipcommand.com/forum/dcboard.php?az=show_topic&forum=19&topic_id=927&mode=full Apparently the document was also available on the WizKids website for some time], but is not anymore.
 
:The conflict itself is referenced in some dossiers such as [http://sarna.s3.amazonaws.com/docs/mwda_dossiers/death_from_above_13.pdf Death from Above 13] as well as [http://www.darkagepress.com/INN-INNWarTouchesAddicks11-03-3132.html the backup site] for WizKids INN articles. Please let me know if there are any problems with these sources! --[[User:Akashi|Akashi]] ([[User talk:Akashi|talk]]) 13:38, 17 April 2013 (PDT)
 
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--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 07:39, 22 April 2020 (EDT)
 
  
:According to my [https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=69136.0 inquiry] over at the BattleTech forum The Battle of Addicks was the first of the MWDA monthly events, and not a physical or digital product beyond possibly some background info on the WK homepage that seems to have been lost. :( As such, I don't think it's a viable source as it can't be accessed or verified anymore, at least until the webpage can be dragged from the grave. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 00:53, 27 April 2020 (EDT)
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Pserratv, the new disambig MoS is to have them on the pages without (disambiguation) in the title. You can confirm with Dmon if you want. --[[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 08:03, 12 July 2023 (EDT)
::OK, I'll check the two books to see if they gave information on the katana and the mech and delete the references in all articles.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 05:40, 27 April 2020 (EDT)
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:Sorry, didn't know that. Are you also then cross-reversing this, because it is quite a work to be done--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 08:06, 12 July 2023 (EDT)
:Addendum: In the forum thread linked above, Mendrugo found the connected scenarios... in the Sarna download section. Not sure why Akashi's link didn't work for me. In any case, the "product" is there. All good. (Need to draw up article.) [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 04:21, 28 April 2020 (EDT)
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::No worries. Yea, it's going to take a bit of time going through them all. Maybe months. But undo'ing the ones from the last few minutes I can take care of. --[[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 08:08, 12 July 2023 (EDT)
::Can you find them? I would like to see them :)--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 04:22, 28 April 2020 (EDT)
 
  
==In-Universe Fiction==
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==Helping out with Family Trees==
Hi Pserratv.  I wanted to suggest something. I'm adding category "[[:Category:In-Universe Media]]" to anything that was made/written in universe. I think adding Media as category would confuse things up since Media is basically pertains to real world game items. I'd hate to see if people reading sarna thought the a book written in-universe was a REAL book for example. Do you think you could add the In-Universe Media category instead of the media? -- [[User:Wrangler|Wrangler]] ([[User talk:Wrangler|talk]]) 08:33, 22 June 2020 (EDT)
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Hey Ps, just looking at your new [[Dinah Marik]] article. It is good that these last characters from the family trees get added, but could you do me a favor and when doing characters with relatives, could you be sure to add citations to the family members in the infobox as well. Even if it is all the same reference it saves me having to go check next time I am doing family tree work!--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 11:51, 11 September 2023 (EDT)
:Yes, I'll quickly rearrange the existing ones and change my link to use it for new entries.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 08:34, 22 June 2020 (EDT)
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:Will do that. It is a copy of ond of the brothers, who does not have it. There will be a loooot of with that! 🤣--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 15:33, 11 September 2023 (EDT)
::Thanks!! -- [[User:Wrangler|Wrangler]] ([[User talk:Wrangler|talk]]) 10:13, 22 June 2020 (EDT)
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::Sorry for slow reply, I had not noticed that you had replied. And yes, sadly there will be a LOT of copy/paste the same reference but it is better than trying to put it into the family tree itself. (you have seen how horrible the code is for them even without references). So when somebody clicks on a character in a tree, we need them to see all the siblings etc are referenced, just so people can feel confident the tree is correct.
:::Done. Maybe we should delete their links to Media and keep them only as In-Universe Media as you proposed.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 10:31, 22 June 2020 (EDT)
 
  
==Lawyers, Guns, & Money==
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::Also, reversed your edit adding in the Devalis surname to [[Carolina Devalis]]'s mother as we don't know she had the same surname. (She likely did as this is BattleTech).--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 07:35, 15 September 2023 (EDT)
Appreciate the work you put into this. However, your copypasta summary text for the character articles seems to contain an error: The ''Colossus'' was not "pristine", far from it in fact - they restored it to flight status but it's a miracle they managed the feat. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 14:43, 20 August 2020 (EDT)
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:::Where I live marriage does not carry a change in surnames, but in Battletech universe it seems it is always the "saxon" way, that was the point, but OK with your change.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 07:42, 15 September 2023 (EDT)
:Just saw it is considered battle scarred... I'll have to amend them all. Time. I'll try to do it today.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 14:47, 20 August 2020 (EDT)
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::::I actually agree you are likely correct, but we don't actually know for sure.--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 08:31, 15 September 2023 (EDT)
  
== Operation Higashikuni (Canon Event) ==
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==Armorcast BattleTech==
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This is the website of the former owner of Armorcast. The page is a copy of Armorcast's BattleTech online catalog. [http://timdp.members.sonic.net/battletech/ Armorcast BattleTech] --[[User:Cache|Cache]] ([[User talk:Cache|talk]]) 09:37, 7 November 2023 (EST)
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:I think it is work having here on sarna just in case.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 09:38, 7 November 2023 (EST)
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::I'm sorry for not being clear. I was sharing the website for your reference. That is the most accurate information on the kits, as well as better quality pictures. (I'm just not in a position to contribute more at the moment.)--[[User:Cache|Cache]] ([[User talk:Cache|talk]]) 09:43, 7 November 2023 (EST)
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:::OK, thanks. I'll review and update based on your copy of the page!!--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 11:54, 7 November 2023 (EST)
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::::I was reviewing this again and realized that an article already had been created for Armorcast's BattleTech miniatures. It might be best to merge your recent article into the old: [[Miniatures - Armorcast]]--[[User:Cache|Cache]] ([[User talk:Cache|talk]]) 16:42, 10 November 2023 (EST)
  
It's unclear what your intent is in creating [[Operation Higashikuni (Canon Event)]] when [[Operation Higashikuni]] already exists. Can you weigh in on [[Talk:Operation Higashikuni (Canon Event)]] with your thoughts on why two separate articles are warranted? [[User:Tosta Dojen|Tosta Dojen]] ([[User talk:Tosta Dojen|talk]]) 19:56, 7 September 2020 (EDT)
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== Query ==
* Done. Now let's continue on there :)--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 04:05, 8 September 2020 (EDT)
 
  
== 2011 (Policy:Year Pages) ==
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Hi Pseterrav, I'm Fredericmora. Can we talk? There is something I would to ask you. F
  
I've reversed most of your [[Special:Diff/624750|recent edit]] to [[2011]], on the basis of these statements from [[Policy:Year Pages]]:
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==Sir Roger articles==
* "Each entry should have only one wikilink, leading to an article that will provide the details of the event." I removed the second wikilink that was added.
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Hi Pserratv, in speaking with other senior admins on Discord, we determined/confirmed that [[Sir Roger]] is not canon and because of that, we will be moving the 4 mech pages from its publication into the main article as a subsection. I will do my best to make sure nothing is omitted. [[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 05:06, 4 January 2024 (EST)
* "Conflicts (formerly Battles): events that involve violence as their central occurrence, in whatever form that may take: campaigns, skirmishes, two-person altercations, assassinations, raids, civilian riots, invasions, genocide, wars, etc." Assassination is expressly listed, so I moved Oleg Tikonov's assassination back into the "Conflicts" section.
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: No worries. Tell which will be the new place and I'll try to review this.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 17:19, 4 January 2024 (EST)
I'm slowly working on a comprehensive review of year pages to align them with the applicable policy, so if I've missed anything here, please let me know! [[User:Tosta Dojen|Tosta Dojen]] ([[User talk:Tosta Dojen|talk]]) 14:55, 14 September 2020 (EDT)
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:: Ok, take a look and let me know what you think. It was pretty much a copy/paste. [[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 07:42, 6 January 2024 (EST)
:Didn't know this detail on these two points of the policy. You have a lot of work then on this, as I've seen several Year pages not following this policies.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 04:12, 15 September 2020 (EDT)
 
::Indeed, that's the very reason why I've embarked on a comprehensive review! {{emoticon|;)}} [[User:Tosta Dojen|Tosta Dojen]] ([[User talk:Tosta Dojen|talk]]) 15:18, 18 September 2020 (EDT)
 
  
== Shrapnel Issue 2 ==
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==Tina Rosche and Evan Kaiple==
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Hi again! Could I ask you to take a look at your [[Tina Rosche]] article? It looks like almost the whole main body was copied from the Andrew Giggins page and doesn't really pertain to Rosche, aside from her presumably being with her unit during those events. I think most of it can be removed.
  
Hey Ps,
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Second, the [[Evan Kaiple]] page is very long and has 2 challenges I'm hoping you can fix more easily than me: 1) it needs some subheaders to organize the history into sections and make it easier to read, and 2) it needs to be in the past tense. Thanks! [[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 08:08, 6 January 2024 (EST)
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: Done except the past tense... not sure what you want.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 11:17, 9 January 2024 (EST)
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:: (Apologies for jumping in...) Preterite tense or imperfect tense. Much of the article is written as though it is currently happening. It should be written as though it happened in the past. For example, "The unit discovers that the next mission was in Skye." should be, "The unit discovered that the next mission was on Skye."--[[User:Cache|Cache]] ([[User talk:Cache|talk]]) 12:35, 9 January 2024 (EST)
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:::Got it. I'll try to review it, but not this week.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 04:20, 10 January 2024 (EST)
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::I cleaned up the first part of the Kaiple article up to the section on Skye. Putting in the subheaders helped a lot. I'll check back in next week and do a little more if you haven't had tmie to look at it by then. Also thanks for cleaning up the Rosche page. [[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 20:57, 15 January 2024 (EST)
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:I did until "Shinonoi", but no more. If you can cleanse the rest, better.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 11:54, 17 January 2024 (EST)
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::All done now, thanks for your help. It's a lot for one character, isn't it?! [[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 12:29, 30 January 2024 (EST)
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:::Maybe too much, but those diaries cover a lot of detailed information which maybe I wrote too much.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 13:40, 30 January 2024 (EST)
  
I am not sure if you backed the kickstarter but [[Shrapnel Issue 2]] was released yesterday and it has quite a lot of [[Solaris VII]] stuff in it. I think you will enjoy it :-)--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 07:40, 16 September 2020 (EDT)
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==George Adlet==
:No backer... will have to wait for a few days... but those are good news to hear!!--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 08:06, 16 September 2020 (EDT)
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Hi Pserratv, could I ask you to take a look at [[George Adlet]]? I just did a touchup of the page but couldn't figure out the 3 parts I marked. Thanks [[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 00:28, 25 February 2024 (EST)
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:I've reviewed them and madeone amendment while settign details and pages of the points marked. Hope this helps.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 17:42, 3 March 2024 (EST)
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::So, I wasn't really asking for citations there, or I would have used the <nowiki>{{cn}}</nowiki> tag. I figured the one in the article lead was a typo, but for the other two I was looking for clarification on the meaning of what you wrote. I don't have that book and you didn't link to anything that could explain what a Greenlander, Inuit, or Dankova is. I think it would be helpful to any reader if all information we write can be explained or accessed without requiring a book. [[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 01:23, 4 March 2024 (EST)
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:::Got it now and I'm going to amend that, using wiki in most cases as they are existing terms.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 08:53, 4 March 2024 (EST)
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::::Now that I know what you meant, I was able to smooth it out. Thanks for your time and help improving this. [[User:Csdavis715|Csdavis715]] ([[User talk:Csdavis715|talk]]) 09:47, 4 March 2024 (EST)
  
== Katherine Wolf ==
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== MWDA content ==
  
I notice you've restored some references to [[Katherine Wolf]] as the daughter of [[Jaime Wolf]] and [[Marisha Dandridge]]. I had removed those because it seems to be an error. BTW's [[Jaime Wolf]] article cites ''[[Wolf Pack]]'' for its claims about Jaime's children. ''Wolf Pack'' features a woman named Katherine Wolf, but she's married to Jaime's son [[Mackenzie Wolf]], which makes her Jaime's daughter-in-law, not his daughter. The only citation I see here doesn't support the claim, and I'm guessing the contributing editor misunderstood the relationships there.
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As I know that you aren't on Discord, I'm unable to forward you in the direction of the resource Google drive we are using for MWDA content. However I can let you know that we have found the lance lists that were on the dossiers are not in the [[MechWarrior: Dark Age - Dossiers and Pilot Cards]] resource. Additionally we have found small differences between all the different fan-created compendiums and other resources. Finally we are taking pictures of MWDA models and cards to place on the wiki, which will also assist in the creation of the character articles and many others. I am using [[MechWarrior: Dark Age - Miniatures]] for a staging area and doing modifications to the display of such data.
  
Do you have a source that supports the existence of a Katherine who's the daughter of Jaime and Marisha? [[User:Tosta Dojen|Tosta Dojen]] ([[User talk:Tosta Dojen|talk]]) 09:35, 5 October 2020 (EDT)
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Helping with all of this is [[User:Tumult&Travail]], who is going though these MWDA meta-sources and cleaning up a fair amount of pages that either took from them, or say that they did. I'll let him expand on that himself.
:No, but Jaime's article is still wrong as it says this Katrina is a daughter of Jaime and Marisha.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 09:47, 5 October 2020 (EDT)
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--[[User:Deadfire|Deadfire]] ([[User talk:Deadfire|talk]]) 14:21, 19 March 2024 (EDT)
::I didn't catch that one in my first pass. Without a primary source citation to support the existence of a daughter named Katherine, I'm going to remove those references again. I'll fix the erroneous claim in the [[Jaime Wolf]] article while I'm at it. [[User:Tosta Dojen|Tosta Dojen]] ([[User talk:Tosta Dojen|talk]]) 10:17, 5 October 2020 (EDT)
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: I guess I've been called in here. I wouldn't say they're [[Canon#Meta-sources|meta-sources]] as Sarna uses the term - I don't believe anyone's been directly citing ''unofficial'' compilations and the like - but there are a number of pages around with poor citations of DA dossiers dating back to the early days of Sarna. Individual dossiers directly linked in bibliographies without any indication of what, if any, material was drawn from them, usually. I've been mostly on break from sweeping those up for the last month or so, mostly because I have a lot on my plate otherwise, so there's still [https://www.sarna.net/wiki/index.php?search=sarna.net+dossier+pdf&title=Special%3ASearch&profile=default&fulltext=1 too many pages] to go. The goal's to cite what hasn't been cited, update citations to [[MechWarrior: Dark Age - Dossiers and Pilot Cards|the most current publication of the dossiers]] when applicable (with the caveat that some fragments of info, like the lance lists, never made it into the most current publication), clear direct links to dossiers from bibliographies, and basically push things from 2008 standards to 2024 standards. --[[User:Tumult&#38;Travail|Tumult&#38;Travail]] ([[User talk:Tumult&#38;Travail|talk]]) 18:12, 19 March 2024 (EDT)
:::Ok. No problem.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 11:24, 5 October 2020 (EDT)
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::I'm using as reference the two documents that are being shared in the classic battletech pages. If there are new sources, you can contact me in mail e-mail address. it is easy... it is gmail with this user.--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 09:03, 21 March 2024 (EDT)
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:::Aye, it is just that easy. I shared the Google drive folder with your Gmail. That should provide you what all we are looking at with this.--[[User:Deadfire|Deadfire]] ([[User talk:Deadfire|talk]]) 12:28, 24 March 2024 (EDT)
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::::Thanks, downloading them :).--[[User:Pserratv|Pserratv]] ([[User talk:Pserratv|talk]]) 12:35, 24 March 2024 (EDT)

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Archives[edit]

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Special Pilot Abilities[edit]

Perhaps it would be best to limit references for SPA's to what is in the core rulebooks rather than individual cards?--Cache (talk) 11:26, 21 February 2022 (EST)

Hi Cache. I have nothing else to refer, that is why I'm using the cards... I'm so advanced now that I'm going to keep with them...--Pserratv (talk) 11:28, 21 February 2022 (EST)

Apocryphal Image Category[edit]

It is a little late now, but the {{ApocryphalImage}} tag automatically adds the image to that category. There is no need to manually add the category to each image.--Cache (talk) 08:52, 14 March 2022 (EDT)

Well, there will be more, so if that is the case, less work for me ;)--Pserratv (talk) 11:26, 14 March 2022 (EDT)

Tim Nelson[edit]

You created the page Tim Nelson a few years ago, and last night it wound up in Special:LonelyPages. Do you recall anything he might have been an illustrator for? A Google Search gives me nothing, but Jim Nelson did draw a lot of stuff. I am wondering if you might have mistaken a J for a T in a signature?--Talvin (talk) 09:22, 12 April 2022 (EDT)

It is clearly a mistake from my end. Page should be deleted.--Pserratv (talk) 08:58, 14 April 2022 (EDT)
Tagged!--Talvin (talk) 09:01, 14 April 2022 (EDT)

Spanish edition - BattleTech: Refuerzos[edit]

Hello Pserratv. In List of BattleTech Products in Spanish#BattleTech: Refuerzos the description appears to be a copy of the AeroTech entry. I suspect that this may be a case of copy and paste where the title (and perhaps other info) was not updated. When you have an opportunity, could you please check and update that entry? --Dude RB (talk) 09:01, 16 April 2022 (EDT)

I'll have to review yes.--Pserratv (talk) 03:40, 19 April 2022 (EDT)
Thanks. --Dude RB (talk) 18:14, 19 April 2022 (EDT)

Marpesia Stables Image[edit]

If you want the 50px resolution for this image, you will have to create a 210px image with transparent background surrounding it. It's the only way I've found to get around the issue.--Cache (talk) 12:07, 2 May 2022 (EDT)

Drake Allin[edit]

Hey, I've embarked on a project to update the various Bloodname pages and I'm currently working on the Ghost Bears -- there's a character named Star Captain Drake Allin who has both a citation referring to page 40 of Invading Clans and a linked page that gives the same citation. However, I've reviewed Invading Clans and can find no such reference. Can you by any chance point me in the direction of where I might find this character so the citations can be updated? -Hugo Bossk (talk) 18:51, 25 May 2022 (EDT)

Discussion here: Talk:Drake Allin--Talvin (talk) 19:08, 25 May 2022 (EDT)
I've answered there, no good news.--Pserratv (talk) 06:30, 30 May 2022 (EDT)

Cool find[edit]

I found a page where someone is talking about an old catalog for Diseños Orbitales. My Spanish is...comprendo un poquito. I thought you might be interested. https://roldelos90.blogspot.com/2016/09/un-catalogo-de-disenos-orbitales-1992.html

--Talvin (talk) 13:05, 1 June 2022 (EDT)

And on that note, I have made Diseños Orbitales.--Talvin (talk) 13:39, 1 June 2022 (EDT)
Thanks! It is interesting to see it. I had one (not this one) long time ago, but died from age...--Pserratv (talk) 04:14, 2 June 2022 (EDT)

Karsten/Bennis Productions[edit]

Hey PS,

Just so you know I changed Karsten/Bennis Productions to Karsten-Bennis Productions as the wiki code wants to create a sub page from anything with a slash in the title.--Dmon (talk) 10:39, 7 June 2022 (EDT)

OOO, didn't know. I'll review the links as most probably there are some of them incorrect.--Pserratv (talk) 10:52, 7 June 2022 (EDT)

Template: Format Link[edit]

Seeing your past edits on fixing redirects, I want to let you know of this "new" Template we have to make linking of sections in pages easier. As well it can work as a redirect link as well.Template:Format_link --Deadfire (talk) 17:02, 20 June 2022 (EDT)

Good to know. Thanks.--Pserratv (talk) 08:19, 23 June 2022 (EDT)

Lider[edit]

Morning, Pserratv. Question of pure curiosity from me: why is the word "LiDER" backwards on this image of the Warhammer II? All of the other words display properly.--Revanche (talk|contribs) 11:50, 21 June 2022 (EDT)

I've possessed this for ages and never saw that detail. Most probably it is an error preparing the pages... usually is written correctly.--Pserratv (talk) 08:18, 23 June 2022 (EDT)
I've been checking them all, and LiDER is the spell in all of them I see two options Revanche:
  • They wanted to make it special.
  • In spanisht the word is Líder, so maybe to make it more international they took out the accent but kept the letter in non-capital letters. I sincerely do not know how this works now, but when I studied it was not needed to put accents in capital letters, but a must with non-capital
Hope it helps--Pserratv (talk) 11:18, 11 October 2022 (EDT)

ER medium laser capitalization[edit]

Hello! Just wanted to say that, at least to my understanding, ER medium lasers aren't capitalized, just like medium lasers. If I am wrong, do feel free to jab me! -Breenland (talk) 15:40, 15 September 2022 (EDT)

Sincerely speaking, there has been so much movement on this topic that I'm totally lost...--Pserratv (talk) 10:21, 22 September 2022 (EDT)

BattleCorps page numbers[edit]

Hi Pserratv

I see you've added page numbers to some of the BattleCorps citations. Can you tell me where these come from? Madness Divine (talk) 13:40, 24 October 2022 (EDT)

There was a recap PDF with all the articles base on these list:

I'm using this.--Pserratv (talk) 05:54, 25 October 2022 (EDT)

I didn't run across a recap PDF last time I went through the site's downloads section. Do you have a URL for it? Madness Divine (talk) 11:29, 25 October 2022 (EDT)
I think they were shared to me by User:HF22 himself.--Pserratv (talk) 12:33, 25 October 2022 (EDT)
Thanks. I think that might be a limited-access document I read about, so I won't ask him for a copy. Madness Divine (talk) 14:32, 26 October 2022 (EDT)

technical category[edit]

Hey PS,

Deadfire has asked me have a word with you about you creating the "technical category for administration purposes" stuff. I am not sure what they do, but Deadfire seems pretty unhappy about them so could you hold off on creating more and possibly consider having a conversation with DF about what needs doing on the wiki regarding such stuff.--Dmon (talk) 12:41, 8 January 2023 (EST)

no worries, i'll do. But all those pages are appearing as top wanted pages when they are nothing.--Pserratv (talk) 16:33, 8 January 2023 (EST)

Spanish translations[edit]

Hi, Pserratv.

I found some epub translations on Anna's Archive that I think were a fan project. Fin de partida, Punto de conflagracion, Patriotas y tiranos, and Tormentas del destino; Silencio en el paraíso and Verdades y sombras by Martin Delrio; and La forja de un héroe, Operacion audacia, and Rugido de honor by Blaine Lee Pardoe. Have you heard anything about these? Madness Divine (talk) 21:39, 25 March 2023 (EDT)

Yes, they are the spanish translations of these books. I do not have them (indeed in spanihs I basically have both trilogies and a couple more.--Pserratv (talk) 11:49, 30 March 2023 (EDT)
Do you know whether they're official products or fan translations? Madness Divine (talk) 18:50, 30 March 2023 (EDT)
Hi, in this link List of BattleTech Print Novels in Spanish you can find the ones I identified as original. There are some from an Anna, but the rest. I mean there are original translations of them. I simply don't have them though.--Pserratv (talk) 05:27, 31 March 2023 (EDT)

Disambig pages[edit]

Pserratv, the new disambig MoS is to have them on the pages without (disambiguation) in the title. You can confirm with Dmon if you want. --Csdavis715 (talk) 08:03, 12 July 2023 (EDT)

Sorry, didn't know that. Are you also then cross-reversing this, because it is quite a work to be done--Pserratv (talk) 08:06, 12 July 2023 (EDT)
No worries. Yea, it's going to take a bit of time going through them all. Maybe months. But undo'ing the ones from the last few minutes I can take care of. --Csdavis715 (talk) 08:08, 12 July 2023 (EDT)

Helping out with Family Trees[edit]

Hey Ps, just looking at your new Dinah Marik article. It is good that these last characters from the family trees get added, but could you do me a favor and when doing characters with relatives, could you be sure to add citations to the family members in the infobox as well. Even if it is all the same reference it saves me having to go check next time I am doing family tree work!--Dmon (talk) 11:51, 11 September 2023 (EDT)

Will do that. It is a copy of ond of the brothers, who does not have it. There will be a loooot of with that! 🤣--Pserratv (talk) 15:33, 11 September 2023 (EDT)
Sorry for slow reply, I had not noticed that you had replied. And yes, sadly there will be a LOT of copy/paste the same reference but it is better than trying to put it into the family tree itself. (you have seen how horrible the code is for them even without references). So when somebody clicks on a character in a tree, we need them to see all the siblings etc are referenced, just so people can feel confident the tree is correct.
Also, reversed your edit adding in the Devalis surname to Carolina Devalis's mother as we don't know she had the same surname. (She likely did as this is BattleTech).--Dmon (talk) 07:35, 15 September 2023 (EDT)
Where I live marriage does not carry a change in surnames, but in Battletech universe it seems it is always the "saxon" way, that was the point, but OK with your change.--Pserratv (talk) 07:42, 15 September 2023 (EDT)
I actually agree you are likely correct, but we don't actually know for sure.--Dmon (talk) 08:31, 15 September 2023 (EDT)

Armorcast BattleTech[edit]

This is the website of the former owner of Armorcast. The page is a copy of Armorcast's BattleTech online catalog. Armorcast BattleTech --Cache (talk) 09:37, 7 November 2023 (EST)

I think it is work having here on sarna just in case.--Pserratv (talk) 09:38, 7 November 2023 (EST)
I'm sorry for not being clear. I was sharing the website for your reference. That is the most accurate information on the kits, as well as better quality pictures. (I'm just not in a position to contribute more at the moment.)--Cache (talk) 09:43, 7 November 2023 (EST)
OK, thanks. I'll review and update based on your copy of the page!!--Pserratv (talk) 11:54, 7 November 2023 (EST)
I was reviewing this again and realized that an article already had been created for Armorcast's BattleTech miniatures. It might be best to merge your recent article into the old: Miniatures - Armorcast--Cache (talk) 16:42, 10 November 2023 (EST)

Query[edit]

Hi Pseterrav, I'm Fredericmora. Can we talk? There is something I would to ask you. F

Sir Roger articles[edit]

Hi Pserratv, in speaking with other senior admins on Discord, we determined/confirmed that Sir Roger is not canon and because of that, we will be moving the 4 mech pages from its publication into the main article as a subsection. I will do my best to make sure nothing is omitted. Csdavis715 (talk) 05:06, 4 January 2024 (EST)

No worries. Tell which will be the new place and I'll try to review this.--Pserratv (talk) 17:19, 4 January 2024 (EST)
Ok, take a look and let me know what you think. It was pretty much a copy/paste. Csdavis715 (talk) 07:42, 6 January 2024 (EST)

Tina Rosche and Evan Kaiple[edit]

Hi again! Could I ask you to take a look at your Tina Rosche article? It looks like almost the whole main body was copied from the Andrew Giggins page and doesn't really pertain to Rosche, aside from her presumably being with her unit during those events. I think most of it can be removed.

Second, the Evan Kaiple page is very long and has 2 challenges I'm hoping you can fix more easily than me: 1) it needs some subheaders to organize the history into sections and make it easier to read, and 2) it needs to be in the past tense. Thanks! Csdavis715 (talk) 08:08, 6 January 2024 (EST)

Done except the past tense... not sure what you want.--Pserratv (talk) 11:17, 9 January 2024 (EST)
(Apologies for jumping in...) Preterite tense or imperfect tense. Much of the article is written as though it is currently happening. It should be written as though it happened in the past. For example, "The unit discovers that the next mission was in Skye." should be, "The unit discovered that the next mission was on Skye."--Cache (talk) 12:35, 9 January 2024 (EST)
Got it. I'll try to review it, but not this week.--Pserratv (talk) 04:20, 10 January 2024 (EST)
I cleaned up the first part of the Kaiple article up to the section on Skye. Putting in the subheaders helped a lot. I'll check back in next week and do a little more if you haven't had tmie to look at it by then. Also thanks for cleaning up the Rosche page. Csdavis715 (talk) 20:57, 15 January 2024 (EST)
I did until "Shinonoi", but no more. If you can cleanse the rest, better.--Pserratv (talk) 11:54, 17 January 2024 (EST)
All done now, thanks for your help. It's a lot for one character, isn't it?! Csdavis715 (talk) 12:29, 30 January 2024 (EST)
Maybe too much, but those diaries cover a lot of detailed information which maybe I wrote too much.--Pserratv (talk) 13:40, 30 January 2024 (EST)

George Adlet[edit]

Hi Pserratv, could I ask you to take a look at George Adlet? I just did a touchup of the page but couldn't figure out the 3 parts I marked. Thanks Csdavis715 (talk) 00:28, 25 February 2024 (EST)

I've reviewed them and madeone amendment while settign details and pages of the points marked. Hope this helps.--Pserratv (talk) 17:42, 3 March 2024 (EST)
So, I wasn't really asking for citations there, or I would have used the {{cn}} tag. I figured the one in the article lead was a typo, but for the other two I was looking for clarification on the meaning of what you wrote. I don't have that book and you didn't link to anything that could explain what a Greenlander, Inuit, or Dankova is. I think it would be helpful to any reader if all information we write can be explained or accessed without requiring a book. Csdavis715 (talk) 01:23, 4 March 2024 (EST)
Got it now and I'm going to amend that, using wiki in most cases as they are existing terms.--Pserratv (talk) 08:53, 4 March 2024 (EST)
Now that I know what you meant, I was able to smooth it out. Thanks for your time and help improving this. Csdavis715 (talk) 09:47, 4 March 2024 (EST)

MWDA content[edit]

As I know that you aren't on Discord, I'm unable to forward you in the direction of the resource Google drive we are using for MWDA content. However I can let you know that we have found the lance lists that were on the dossiers are not in the MechWarrior: Dark Age - Dossiers and Pilot Cards resource. Additionally we have found small differences between all the different fan-created compendiums and other resources. Finally we are taking pictures of MWDA models and cards to place on the wiki, which will also assist in the creation of the character articles and many others. I am using MechWarrior: Dark Age - Miniatures for a staging area and doing modifications to the display of such data.

Helping with all of this is User:Tumult&Travail, who is going though these MWDA meta-sources and cleaning up a fair amount of pages that either took from them, or say that they did. I'll let him expand on that himself. --Deadfire (talk) 14:21, 19 March 2024 (EDT)

I guess I've been called in here. I wouldn't say they're meta-sources as Sarna uses the term - I don't believe anyone's been directly citing unofficial compilations and the like - but there are a number of pages around with poor citations of DA dossiers dating back to the early days of Sarna. Individual dossiers directly linked in bibliographies without any indication of what, if any, material was drawn from them, usually. I've been mostly on break from sweeping those up for the last month or so, mostly because I have a lot on my plate otherwise, so there's still too many pages to go. The goal's to cite what hasn't been cited, update citations to the most current publication of the dossiers when applicable (with the caveat that some fragments of info, like the lance lists, never made it into the most current publication), clear direct links to dossiers from bibliographies, and basically push things from 2008 standards to 2024 standards. --Tumult&Travail (talk) 18:12, 19 March 2024 (EDT)
I'm using as reference the two documents that are being shared in the classic battletech pages. If there are new sources, you can contact me in mail e-mail address. it is easy... it is gmail with this user.--Pserratv (talk) 09:03, 21 March 2024 (EDT)
Aye, it is just that easy. I shared the Google drive folder with your Gmail. That should provide you what all we are looking at with this.--Deadfire (talk) 12:28, 24 March 2024 (EDT)
Thanks, downloading them :).--Pserratv (talk) 12:35, 24 March 2024 (EDT)